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Showing posts with label Descriptive Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Descriptive Writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, 19 October 2016

Poems

Walt: write a poem using nouns, verbs, and adjectives.


Task Description: We made poems as a class and individually. The last two are both of mine. Others were made by Mr Goodwin.

Wednesday, 21 September 2016

The Day ??? Went Psycho

Have you ever used a telescope before? Fred was on the moon with his telescope in hand. He decided to use it and see what’s going on at Mars. He set it up and took a peek. He couldn’t see Mars. There was something blocking Mars.

Read This Story To Find Out!

Friday, 5 August 2016

The Rio 2016 Olympics Have Started!!!

This Friday (Friday, 5 August 2016) something happened. An event that we were all waiting for... The Olympics Rio 2016 started! The olympics have gone from 1 event/sport to over 25! How cool is that? The Olympics have given out about 1000 medals! (all types) maybe even more!

Im mostly excited about the hurdles and who wins. Because the person who wins may be featured in my animation. The athlete i'm looking forward to is usain bolt. I want to see if he breaks the 100m men's record. Usain bolt, i’m cheering for you! The hurdles are actually my favourite sport in the olympics.

So altogether the olympics will be fun to watch and I wish good luck for the athletes competing this Olympics. YOU should watch it! (if you like sports) so bye! I hope you have a good time watching it!
The olympics are not really my thing so I probably won’t watch it. Unless if i’m forced to.

Thursday, 4 August 2016

Descriptive olympic writing

Usain Bolt and other contestants were in a colossal stadium with a tremendous crowd cheering and shouting. Usain Bolt was getting ready to race in a 100m run. He was a little bit nervous but he was determined to win. Flashing cameras filled the stadium and the other contestants were almost ready to race.


The time has come. All the contestants got ready with their starting blocks. “Ready?... Set…BANG!” All the contestants ran with all their might. Usain Bolt was behind at first but then he darted across the track and got to the finish line in about 9.64 seconds.

Usain Bolt is panting on the ground and trying to get energy back. Eventually he got up and everybody was shouting and cheering and Usain Bolt was happy. He got another gold medal and he was very tired. The contestants that didn’t get a medal were very depressed. The crowd was taking even more photos than before. The noise grew louder and noisier as people cheered.

Thursday, 28 July 2016

If I Was an Olympic Athlete



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The time has come, people have trained for 4 years for the energy draining event. The Olympics is a tiring event that has many different sports. Over 10000 people come to watch. The Olympics has many sports such as swimming and weightlifting.
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Information About Hurdles (Don’t bother reading if you already know)
Hurdles is a event that involves jumping and running. You have to jump over fence-like hurdles that block your way to the finish line. But you also have to sprint a long way at the same time. So speed and jump height is your main thing to train on if you are doing this.
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I would compete in Hurdles because it seems to be the easiest event and also uses lots of energy. The hurdles also seem to use jumping skills which is something I have. The hurdles just seem to be the easy event altogether and it's also very hard yet again because you have to compete with other people. Although I like jumping and running around, I still think it’s quite hard unless you have the energy.
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If I won in third, second, or first place I would represent New Zealand because that’s where most of my family were born. Why did I represent this country you ask? Well it’s simple. It’s all because I was born in NZ with my family and I like this country a lot. This is mainly also why I don’t like going to other countries. I think my family would be proud of me representing this country too.
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I think that competing in the Olympics would be very fun and scary. Why? Well it’s because it feels like you have more than 100 families watching you. It’s also fun because some people would be cheering you on so you could win. If you won in first place you might be crying of joy and also everybody that wanted you to win would cheer. Altogether, if you are shy, competing in the Olympics may not be your best choice.
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The Olympic games are really tiring but fun at the same time. Just remember that winning isn’t the goal. The goal is to do your hardest and be proud of how well you do. The olympic games have other events than just hurdles too. So if you don’t like hurdles you can search up Olympic Game Sports The Olympic games are altogether very fun to watch, or compete in.

Wednesday, 15 June 2016

Monster Descriptions

Walt: write a character description.
Task Description: Today I have written what I think these monsters would be like. These are not my monsters, the descriptions might not be the same as the real monster too. I hope you enjoy reading my descriptive writing