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I am a Year 5 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Rooms 9 and 10. My teachers are Mr Baxendine and Mr Goodwin.
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Showing posts with label Narrative. Show all posts
Wednesday, 21 September 2016
The Day ??? Went Psycho
Have you ever used a telescope before? Fred was on the moon with his telescope in hand. He decided to use it and see what’s going on at Mars. He set it up and took a peek. He couldn’t see Mars. There was something blocking Mars.
Thursday, 28 July 2016
If I Was an Olympic Athlete
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The time has come, people have trained for 4 years for the energy draining event. The Olympics is a tiring event that has many different sports. Over 10000 people come to watch. The Olympics has many sports such as swimming and weightlifting.
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Information About Hurdles (Don’t bother reading if you already know)
Hurdles is a event that involves jumping and running. You have to jump over fence-like hurdles that block your way to the finish line. But you also have to sprint a long way at the same time. So speed and jump height is your main thing to train on if you are doing this.
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I would compete in Hurdles because it seems to be the easiest event and also uses lots of energy. The hurdles also seem to use jumping skills which is something I have. The hurdles just seem to be the easy event altogether and it's also very hard yet again because you have to compete with other people. Although I like jumping and running around, I still think it’s quite hard unless you have the energy.
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If I won in third, second, or first place I would represent New Zealand because that’s where most of my family were born. Why did I represent this country you ask? Well it’s simple. It’s all because I was born in NZ with my family and I like this country a lot. This is mainly also why I don’t like going to other countries. I think my family would be proud of me representing this country too.
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I think that competing in the Olympics would be very fun and scary. Why? Well it’s because it feels like you have more than 100 families watching you. It’s also fun because some people would be cheering you on so you could win. If you won in first place you might be crying of joy and also everybody that wanted you to win would cheer. Altogether, if you are shy, competing in the Olympics may not be your best choice.
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The Olympic games are really tiring but fun at the same time. Just remember that winning isn’t the goal. The goal is to do your hardest and be proud of how well you do. The olympic games have other events than just hurdles too. So if you don’t like hurdles you can search up Olympic Game Sports The Olympic games are altogether very fun to watch, or compete in.
Friday, 1 July 2016
Elemental Agent's Story
WALT: Write a story that describes the setting very well.
It was a thundering storm outside and no villains were outside in the misty air. Elemental agent was bored so he was playing on his computer playing Geometry dash. He was playing this cool level named “Robtop vs Hacker”
He only just started the level until he got teleported into the computer! Elemental agent was turned into a cube with his face on it. Elemental agent was looking around for some clues until he ran into a hacker.
The hacker said “Hahahahahahahahahahahaha!” and ran into Elemental agent and started running but Elemental agent threw parts of the earth at him. The hacker dodged them like a boss. The hacker was hacking on to Elemental agent’s computer desktop. Elemental agent clicked on the hacker and dragged him back into Geometry dash. The hacker dodged a few new moves until he got locked up in a cage, then got destroyed by an elemental laser. The hacker was destroyed forever and Elemental agent was teleported out of his computer. Everybody lived happily ever after.
Except the hacker.
Thursday, 3 March 2016
The Three Little Pigs And The Big Bad Wolf
The Three Little Pigs And The Big Bad Wolf
Made By Joshua
Walt: retell a story.
One day, the three little pigs went out to the wild to find a good place for their houses. They found a good place and started building. The first little pig made his house out of straw. The second makes a house out of sticks, and the third made his house out of bricks and stone.
soon, the wolf came out of the forest, he thought of eating the pigs. The wolf sneaked to his house and said “let me in little pigs!” And the pig said “no! not by the hair of my chinny chin chin!” The wolf huffed, and puffed and blew the house down. After everything was gone of the straw house, the first pig ran and ran. Soon, the first pig and the second were in the stick house, the wolf said “let me in little pig!” And the pig said “no! not by the hair of my…… what do I say again? oh yeah, chinny chin chin!” The wolf huffed, and puffed and blew the second house down. Nothing was left but the door of the stick house.
The two pigs ran to their brother and whammed the door. “Let us in third pig!” said the two pigs outside, the third pig opened the door and let them in, then closed the door in front of the wolf. “let me in little pigs!” And the pig said “no! not by the hair of our rapidly growing chinny chin chins!” The wolf huffed, and puffed and tried his hardest, but the wolf would not blow the bricks over.
The wolf went down the chimney instead, the three pigs tried to light the fire to burn the wolf, they got sticks, a match box and lit the fire. Once the wolf went down, he fell in the fire and hurt his bottom and died. The three pigs then agreed that hard work meant more advantages.
The End!
Task Desc: we retold a story about the three little pigs.
Tuesday, 23 February 2016
Adventures Of Freddy
Walt: write stories with a complete orientation, problem, and resolution
Freddy decided to end this, he got into the water pipe and BLASTED out of the hole. Then all of a sudden.. a fish blasted out too, It was Gregory! Freddy saw him zoom next to him, eventually, he came back down, they both knew that they both have natural skills. Gregory looked into the sky and saw Pat, (read part 1) Gregory waved. “What's going on?” asked Pat “oh, me and this donkey named Freddy got stuck in a whale, we just got out.” Gregory replied everybody laughed, it was a good day.
Task Description: Today my classmates and I made a short story, this story was about a donkey getting stuck inside a whale.
The Adventures Of Gregory Part 2
On one normal day, a donkey named Freddy was swimming in the water. he couldn’t walk on land, he was a very weird donkey. Freddy was very rich, he was almost as rich as the Auckland Bank!
Freddy thought he had a good life, but there were a few things he hasn’t done. Like walking on land for instance.
Freddy wished he could go to the moon, but he needed more money. Freddy needed to get money, but how? Freddy thought of an idea. After a few minutes, he thought of going deep into the ocean to find money, but then suddenly…… a whale came out of nowhere! The whale swallowed him whole.
Inside the whale was disgusting, Freddy saw red walls, skeletons, other fish, all of it was so disgusting! After a few minutes inside the whale, he noticed he wasn’t alone… soon, a walking fish named Gregory (read part 1) came over to Freddy. Freddy was in horror, he didn’t know who this was, but he wanted to ask how to get out, Gregory said that the only way out is through the water pipe, but it was very tough when you’re a fish.
Freddy decided to end this, he got into the water pipe and BLASTED out of the hole. Then all of a sudden.. a fish blasted out too, It was Gregory! Freddy saw him zoom next to him, eventually, he came back down, they both knew that they both have natural skills. Gregory looked into the sky and saw Pat, (read part 1) Gregory waved. “What's going on?” asked Pat “oh, me and this donkey named Freddy got stuck in a whale, we just got out.” Gregory replied everybody laughed, it was a good day.
Task Description: Today my classmates and I made a short story, this story was about a donkey getting stuck inside a whale.
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