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Showing posts with label Short Story. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Short Story. Show all posts

Wednesday, 21 September 2016

The Day ??? Went Psycho

Have you ever used a telescope before? Fred was on the moon with his telescope in hand. He decided to use it and see what’s going on at Mars. He set it up and took a peek. He couldn’t see Mars. There was something blocking Mars.

Read This Story To Find Out!

Thursday, 4 August 2016

Descriptive olympic writing

Usain Bolt and other contestants were in a colossal stadium with a tremendous crowd cheering and shouting. Usain Bolt was getting ready to race in a 100m run. He was a little bit nervous but he was determined to win. Flashing cameras filled the stadium and the other contestants were almost ready to race.


The time has come. All the contestants got ready with their starting blocks. “Ready?... Set…BANG!” All the contestants ran with all their might. Usain Bolt was behind at first but then he darted across the track and got to the finish line in about 9.64 seconds.

Usain Bolt is panting on the ground and trying to get energy back. Eventually he got up and everybody was shouting and cheering and Usain Bolt was happy. He got another gold medal and he was very tired. The contestants that didn’t get a medal were very depressed. The crowd was taking even more photos than before. The noise grew louder and noisier as people cheered.

Thursday, 28 July 2016

If I Was an Olympic Athlete



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The time has come, people have trained for 4 years for the energy draining event. The Olympics is a tiring event that has many different sports. Over 10000 people come to watch. The Olympics has many sports such as swimming and weightlifting.
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Information About Hurdles (Don’t bother reading if you already know)
Hurdles is a event that involves jumping and running. You have to jump over fence-like hurdles that block your way to the finish line. But you also have to sprint a long way at the same time. So speed and jump height is your main thing to train on if you are doing this.
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I would compete in Hurdles because it seems to be the easiest event and also uses lots of energy. The hurdles also seem to use jumping skills which is something I have. The hurdles just seem to be the easy event altogether and it's also very hard yet again because you have to compete with other people. Although I like jumping and running around, I still think it’s quite hard unless you have the energy.
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If I won in third, second, or first place I would represent New Zealand because that’s where most of my family were born. Why did I represent this country you ask? Well it’s simple. It’s all because I was born in NZ with my family and I like this country a lot. This is mainly also why I don’t like going to other countries. I think my family would be proud of me representing this country too.
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I think that competing in the Olympics would be very fun and scary. Why? Well it’s because it feels like you have more than 100 families watching you. It’s also fun because some people would be cheering you on so you could win. If you won in first place you might be crying of joy and also everybody that wanted you to win would cheer. Altogether, if you are shy, competing in the Olympics may not be your best choice.
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The Olympic games are really tiring but fun at the same time. Just remember that winning isn’t the goal. The goal is to do your hardest and be proud of how well you do. The olympic games have other events than just hurdles too. So if you don’t like hurdles you can search up Olympic Game Sports The Olympic games are altogether very fun to watch, or compete in.

Friday, 1 July 2016

Elemental Agent's Story


WALT: Write a story that describes the setting very well.

It was a thundering storm outside and no villains were outside in the misty air. Elemental agent was bored so he was playing on his computer playing Geometry dash. He was playing this cool level named “Robtop vs Hacker”
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He only just started the level until he got teleported into the computer! Elemental agent was turned into a cube with his face on it. Elemental agent was looking around for some clues until he ran into a hacker.
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The hacker said “Hahahahahahahahahahahaha!” and ran into Elemental agent and started running but Elemental agent threw parts of the earth at him. The hacker dodged them like a boss. The hacker was hacking on to Elemental agent’s computer desktop. Elemental agent clicked on the hacker and dragged him back into Geometry dash.  The hacker dodged a few new moves until he got locked up in a cage, then got destroyed by an elemental laser. The hacker was destroyed forever and Elemental agent was teleported out of his computer. Everybody lived happily ever after.

Except the hacker.

Friday, 10 June 2016

Avengers Story

WALT: write a narrative that is descriptive (paints a picture in the reader's mind)
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The Avengers are fighting strong and metallic Ultron robots, why you ask? Let me tell you. The Avengers were chilling in their HQ, all of a sudden Jarvis said “Iron Man, Ultrons are attacking the city!” Iron man was stunned, he quickly told the other avengers and they all went to the center of the city and waited for the Ultrons.


The Avengers did not know that the Ultrons were right under them. There were thousands, millions and trillions of robots, they were doomed. The Ultrons started attacking, Iron Man blasted about 10 of them with his supercharged laser. So now you know how they got into this mess, let’s continue the story shall we?


The Ultrons were strong, they were made of thick titanium and were filled inside with obsidian. The Avengers kept fighting the Ultrons until the Ultrons blasted Captain America with a gassy blast and put Cap (short for captain america)
to sleep. Iron Man blasted 60 Ultrons so far.
Ultron amount: 10,000
Avenger amount: 2
Buildings destroyed: 50


The Ultrons were almost gone, Iron Man had killed 5,000 Ultrons and Hulk had destroyed 3,500 Ultrons. The avengers had cleared out every Ultron but one, Iron Man blasted it into the ocean for it to rust. The Ultrons had been rid from the city and rusted to death. The Ultrons were never heard of again and most of the city lived happily ever after.

The other ones lived in heaven happily ever after, along with the amount of regular people that die everyday.
Task Description: we have used an image to start, end or continue our story by creating what would be happening at the selected time.

Thursday, 21 April 2016

Checking my eyes

Today I needed to have my eyes tested again.  We went to Specsavers and had to wait an extremely long time.  When it was finally my turn I had to go into a little room and I had to look into a machine that had a picture of a hot air balloon flying over a road.  Then after a few seconds of that I went back to the testing room and look at some small letters on the wall and answer some questions.  After that I had to read some sentences from a laminated sheet.  The eye doctor was happy with my eyes but I had to get some tweaks made to my glasses so they don't fall off when I look down.  That took about fifteen minutes as they kept trying to get it perfect.  My glasses make it much better for me to see things.

Friday, 15 April 2016

The Holidays Start


The holidays have now started. I am so excited to see what is going to happen. Today after school, my family celebrated with pizza. The pizza was delicious. After that I played some computer. I played ROBLOX on this game called Sandbox 1. I really like it because you get to build things and be creative. I have also been tested by this user named GoldenYoutube, I am giving a shoutout to you if you own that account. I have been inspired from GoldenYoutube to make my own quiz.




Friday, 18 March 2016

Little Red Riding Hood - TWISTED

Walt: retell a story


In a land… far, far away. It was an exciting and happy land, no fighting ever went on. In a new home for a family of four on a hill, there was a tiny girl that lived in the rickety, broken house. Little red riding fly was the name of the girl, Little fly (for short) was a fly, who only lived with her mother fly. Little red riding fly’s mother said “Little fly, go out and deliver these food scraps from the humans please”.


Little fly did what she was told and went out into the deep, dark pond forest. The forest was spooky and , but there were rabbits to keep Little fly company. Little fly passed a nearby pond and a frog came out to see who was going through the forest. The frog said “who is that going through the forest?” and came through the trees. Little fly asked if the frog would follow her to keep her even more company on the long walk. The frog agreed and they both set off again for her wonderful, granny flies home


Five hours later, Little fly and the nice frog got to grandma flies home. Granny fly accidentally swallowed Little fly whole. Little fly was scared, VERY scared. Little fly could only see apple cores, seeds and rotten gunk everywhere! Little fly decided to fly up the throat of granny fly and got hit by a spider that was shooting down her throat, Little fly was very brave and went up again.

After a few seconds of flying, Little fly was outside of grannies throat. Granny was very happy for Little fly. Frog was too, grandma gave Little fly a big and hard hug. And they lived, happily ever after.

Task desc: Today my class made a twisted story, we thought of amazing ideas to write with. Enjoy my story, and check out others!

Thursday, 3 March 2016

The Three Little Pigs And The Big Bad Wolf

The Three Little Pigs And The Big Bad Wolf
Made By Joshua
Walt: retell a story.
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One day, the three little pigs went out to the wild to find a good place for their houses. They found a good place and started building. The first little pig made his house out of straw. The second makes a house out of sticks, and the third made his house out of bricks and stone.

soon, the wolf came out of the forest, he thought of eating the pigs. The wolf sneaked to his house and said “let me in little pigs!” And the pig said “no! not by the hair of my chinny chin chin!” The wolf huffed, and puffed and blew the house down. After everything was gone of the straw house, the first pig ran and ran. Soon, the first pig and the second were in the stick house, the wolf said  “let me in little pig!” And the pig said “no! not by the hair of my…… what do I say again? oh yeah, chinny chin chin!” The wolf huffed, and puffed and blew the second house down. Nothing was left but the door of the stick house.

The two pigs ran to their brother and whammed the door. “Let us in third pig!” said the two pigs outside, the third pig opened the door and let them in, then closed the door in front of the wolf. “let me in little pigs!” And the pig said “no! not by the hair of our rapidly growing chinny chin chins!”  The wolf huffed, and puffed and tried his hardest, but the wolf would not blow the bricks over.

The wolf went down the chimney instead, the three pigs tried to light the fire to burn the wolf, they got sticks, a match box and lit the fire. Once the wolf went down, he fell in the fire and hurt his bottom and died. The three pigs then agreed that hard work meant more advantages.


The End!
Task Desc: we retold a story about the three little pigs.

Tuesday, 23 February 2016

Adventures Of Freddy

Walt: write stories with a complete orientation, problem, and resolution

The Adventures Of Gregory Part 2

On one normal day, a donkey named Freddy was swimming in the water. he couldn’t walk on land, he was a very weird donkey. Freddy was very rich, he was almost as rich as the Auckland Bank!
Freddy thought he had a good life, but there were a few things he hasn’t done. Like walking on land for instance.

Freddy wished he could go to the moon, but he needed more money. Freddy needed to get money, but how? Freddy thought of an idea. After a few minutes, he thought of going deep into the ocean to find money, but then suddenly…… a whale came out of nowhere! The whale swallowed him whole.

Inside the whale was disgusting, Freddy saw red walls, skeletons, other fish, all of it was so disgusting! After a few minutes inside the whale, he noticed he wasn’t alone… soon, a walking fish named Gregory (read part 1) came over to Freddy. Freddy was in horror, he didn’t know who this was, but he wanted to ask how to get out, Gregory said that the only way out is through the water pipe, but it was very tough when you’re a fish.

Freddy decided to end this, he got into the water pipe and BLASTED out of the hole. Then all of a sudden.. a fish blasted out too, It was Gregory! Freddy saw him zoom next to him, eventually, he came back down, they both knew that they both have natural skills. Gregory looked into the sky and saw Pat, (read part 1) Gregory waved. “What's going on?” asked Pat “oh, me and this donkey named Freddy got stuck in a whale, we just got out.” Gregory replied everybody laughed, it was a good day.



Task Description: Today my classmates and I made a short story, this story was about a donkey getting stuck inside a whale.