On a dull, starless night there was a treacherous headland with a village below it. The old stone lighthouse was a beacon illuminating the water and rocks as it rotated. There were cosy cottages with villagers having a party and saying “Yay!” celebrating Mr Bald Face and Miss Hairy Face Having A Wedding.
There was a lighthouse keeper in the lighthouse and he slammed the window shut with annoyance thinking “Arghhhhh! there is too much noise i can't concentrate!”. Mister monkey man heard an unusual clanking which disturbed the festivities. The window forced open because of the wind and suddenly, everything plunged into darkness.
Mister monkey face picked up a lantern and ran but he tripped, he got back up and ran up the stairs. Mister Monkey Face surveyed the cogs and wheels. Nothing was wrong there so Mister Monkey Face ran up to the last floor.
Mister Monkey Face found out that the enormous lamp had extinguished and thought “What?!” He realized that a boat was coming dangerously close.the horn suddenly blasted and thought “ I'm gonna die!”and he picked up the heavy lamp precariously in a blasting shock. But he stumbled, and the lamp shattered into little shards. He sensed hopelessness.
Gasping for breath, he ran down the stairs. Fortunately, all the villagers came with their lanterns
they all went up to the top and were the beacon and the boat lived safely ever after. (and the villagers)
Gasping for breath, he ran down the stairs. Fourtunatly, all the villagers came with their lanterns
they all went up to the top and were the beacon and the boat lived safly ever after. (and the villagers)
What a great story Josh! Not only did I enjoy reading it, but I really liked the descriptive words that you have used in this story and how you have built up the suspense so I can't wait to see what happens next. You've done a great job with paragraphs and sequencing your story too!
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